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Alongside Cinderella... by ~Bladegrasp:iconBladegrasp:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Mature Romance > Fixed


Can I whisper to your ear,
Can I rest here by your side,
Can I dive into the tide,
That travels to your hips,
And steal dreams from your lips,
While I sail your deep blue eyes,
To the wonders of your thighs,
The shores of your neck taste,
Walk the valley of your waist,
Let my fingers say I love thee,
And if you would only hold me,
I would lay right by your chest,
Delve your back with soft caress,
And indulge in my obsession,
Make your heartbeat my redemption,
As I wish away the light,
For your smile is blinding bright,
That illuminates your beauty,
Which attend to is my duty,
Your silhouette the sweetest law,
As I trace your hair in awe,
To the plains of your right shoulder,
And though the night is getting colder,
Your breath becomes heartwarming,
Singing gently in perfect timing,
To my piercing palpitations,
Which reflect the wild sensations,
That I just cannot repress,
Let this second barely express,
My eternal fascination,
Because somewhere in Creation,
Someone thought you just for me…
©2008-2009 ~Bladegrasp
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Author's Comments

I... really don't know how to even put this. Take a look at the picture yourself and if by the time you can find a way to stop looking you somehow don't believe in God, then I'm just a crashing dreamer. There's a woman this beautiful out there just for me, I just have to find her and make myself worthy of such a fantastic work of art. In the meanwhile though, I'll just write about it for a little bit, make the time pass by a tad faster~ =]

Source of inspiration: "puerto.rico", by n0way < [link] >

Please bear honors to n0way (the photographer) and Alice (the fragment of heaven in the picture) for the inspiration and outstanding art!

I just have to go back to writing now >.< It's a slightly embarassing poem for me, a lot of chunks of it I had to take out and redo, but I think it came out to say the bare minimum I truly wished to. The rest I'll just keep it to myself for now~

:work:

<> Your comments and notes are always appreciated, much more than the faves often enough! So please take a second to drop a line or two if you have something to say~ <>

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*cyre May 9, 2008, 8:28:07 PM
This is amazing. I feel silly but wow. This...I'm breathless, give me a minute...


O.k., I'm better. I loved this. Absolutely amazing.
Let me tell you why:

First of all the manner of which you wrote this poem is to be envied, I have to return your favor by saying I'm so deeply inspired by this...and a bit jealous, if I am permitted to say so.

The direction is clear, the meaning soft, gentle and pure. Very pure, almost as if a light was emanating from this. Very rare...superb but very rare. I will now go and pilfer through every single thing you have submitted.

Oh, in case you haven't already gathered, I now am a loyal fan of yours.

--
"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe
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~Bladegrasp May 9, 2008, 8:52:04 PM
Tonight, of all nights of my life, is the most rewarding one I've been blessed with as a writer...

I do not believe my skill is par to yours, but maybe one day I'll write you a piece, see what comes out~

--
See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...

~Cyre
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*cyre May 9, 2008, 9:03:38 PM
Oh please, now you are just being utterly ridiculous, sir, and I will not tolerate that.

You surpass me, that doesn't bother me.

And the thought of you writing a piece for my enjoyment...well then that would make me a very lucky lady! Wouldn't you agree?

I'm sorry, I don't understand how this night is different from any of the others you've experienced while writing such amazing art.

Impressive work...very impressive work.

--
"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe
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~Bladegrasp May 9, 2008, 9:24:58 PM
See now you're just making me feel like the day I got my first car ><!

It's a good night though, a great night indeed.

--
See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...

~Cyre
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*cyre May 9, 2008, 9:34:38 PM
*stares at him hopelessly*

You think my words are the equivalent of your first car?

Oh dear...oh dear, indeed.

--
"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe
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~Bladegrasp May 9, 2008, 10:00:42 PM
In the best of ways my dear, in the best of ways~

That day was like "Oh no, you just didn't... keys in my hand... Erm... Ok I'm going to sit inside alone for a minute... *close door, lock myself in...* YES!!!"

"Yes" as in the shortest, most childish approach to inevitable happyness, or however you call that ><

--
See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...

~Cyre
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*cyre May 9, 2008, 10:14:02 PM
No no, Kendall, dear, you misunderstood me. I meant how can my words compare to that...I mean your first car??? Thats monumental...certainly more monumental than anything I can ever say to you.

--
"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe
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~Bladegrasp May 9, 2008, 10:43:13 PM
See there's my language barrier popping out of nowhere~

You can say a ton of better things! Right now you're listening though, which makes it kind of hard~ :hug:

--
See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...

~Cyre
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*cyre May 9, 2008, 10:45:16 PM
I've learned I talk too much. So I shut up and listen more now days, you'd better be thankful otherwise your ears would bleed from my talking too much.

I don't see it as a language barrier, its the internet it shows no inflection in the words therefore you don't know the meaning...do you? Stop being so hard on yourself.

--
"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe
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