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Please

Please Hold Me Dear

Fight All My Fears

Show Me A World Where I’ll Cry No More Tears. . .

Don’t Dis-ap-pear

Stay With Me Here

Just Keep Me Warm And Your Love I’ll Re-vere. . .

Let Me Cre -ate You A Dream To-night///...Please Come~
I.....Just Want......Youuu...Please~Make~This~True

Dive To The Eye Of My Storm
Will~You~Keep~Meeee...

In-vin-ci-ble
...vin-ci-ble

Whis-per The Words And I’ll Hold You Tight///I’ll Sing You
Oh....Please.Hold......Meeeee...........Oh~Please~Sing~Me

Words Of Im-pos-si-ble Love...
Words.of..Sweet........Love...

...Beau-ti-ful
...Beau-ti-ful


Please

Please Come To Rest

Soon We’ll Be Blessed

Lay Your Head Soft-ly Right Here By My Chest

If Your Heart Stays

I’ll Show You Ways

Tur-moil And Thun-der Won’t Trou-ble Your~

Days Of De-vo-tion Long O-ver-due///I’ll Give You~
I..Need.You........Hereee......Gent-ly~~~Give~Me~

Mo-ments Of Love You De-serve...
More.....Of.You.........Please...

E-ter-na-lly
..ter-na-lly

No One Will Take You A-way From Me///I’ll Show you~
My......Ca-ress.........Fears.....The~Lack~Of~You~

Won-ders You’ll Ne-ver For-get...
Soon.You........Will.......Lay...

...Here With Me~
...Here With Me~

No-thing Will Take You A-way From Me///I’ll Show you~
My......Ca-ress.........Fears.....The~Lack~Of~You~

Won-ders You’ll Ne-ver For-get...
Soon.You........Will.......Lay...

...Here With Me...
...Here With Me...
©2008-2009 ~Bladegrasp
:iconbladegrasp:

Author's Comments

These are the lyrics I wrote for a part of the instrumental song "Eternal" from Evanescence.

The part that this lyrics only apply to is the Piano that plays inside the storm, starting around the 3:35 time mark.

Because I can't use Courier New as my font to post this song, I had to completely change the way the song was set up for posting, so I apologize for the new, sloppier way of following the notes. Here is the explanation of the symbols used inside the lyrics:


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Legend:

BoldUnderline: Main Piano Note. A letter inside these is where the next note of the piano will find its place in the lyrics. Pronounce the syllable that begins with these marks right when the note of the piano strikes.

ItalicUnderline: Second Piano Note. A letter inside these is where the next note of the secondary piano will find its place in the lyrics. Pronounce the syllable that begins with these marks right when the note of the piano strikes.

NormalText: Main Piano Lyrics. Please do not read over these if you're following the second piano.

Italics Second Piano Lyrics. Please do not read over these if you're following the main piano.

... Time Delay. Elypses symbolize that you may have to wait a little bit for the next note, or at least that it is not a run-on note to the next line of the lyrics

~ Run-On. These are there to let you know that the next note of the lyrics is coming either immediately after or very fast, denoting that you shouldn't breath inbetween.

- Syllable Follow-On. The word you're pronouncing has more than one syllable, and each one belongs to a specific note of the piano. Used to separate the syllables and help pronunciation in accordance with each note.

/// Thought Follow-On. These work just like "~" but with the intention of separating a thought from another. The next word will come immediately after the one preceding the symbol.




Here's a video that contains the song. Please go to the part of the song where the rain sound begins (around the 3:35 time mark), and then you will hear a piano come up. That's where the lyrics begin.

Evanescence - Eternal [ [link] ]

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Here are the links to the poem versions of this song. Thank you so much for giving my lyrics a try, and I hope that you enjoyed them as much as I did writing them~

Eternally - 1 of 2: [ [link] ]
Eternally - 2 of 2: [ [link] ]


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I'd like to thank the following people for everything that they do for me and my work every day.


:iconmythicaldamienne:
Mythical~

Thanks for your constant support, your amazing comments and the nonstop inspiration I find through your gallery. I wish I could pay you back with the same care and attention, and I do try, but I am always trying to get something else up just so I can read your fantastic words about it! You brighten my day quite often~ Thanks!

:icongee-black-parade:
Gee~

Thank you for your never ending, continuosly refreshing love for what I do and who I choose to be. You're an amazing human being and I know that one day you'll become the fantastic actress you want to be! You are an honest, heartwarming person that deserves the world in return for a smile! And hopefully one day we won't be strangers anymore~! The best days of your life are coming~ You just wait~



And to you! Thanks for being the reason I dream these things up! I sincerely hope to see you again sometime! Enjoy!


<> Please leave your comments/opinions for me to improve upon and grow as a writer. This are my first lyrics ever, but I feel very proud that I even attempted this. If the key to the lyrics doesn't make any sense to you, or if you find any errors, please feel free to note me and let me know. <>

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:iconamriah:
It's really pretty! =o!

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:iconbladegrasp:
Thanks so much! This is like my dearest project right now~ I appreciate your words~

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~Cyre
:iconcyre:
You know I'm in love with this song. You know that I think this is the most beautiful thing I've seen in quite some time. You know I think you're clever and brilliant for creating it.

You know all of that but I'm putting it out here that way everyone else knows.

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:iconbladegrasp:
I really thank you for every single word~

It means the world to me, I hope you can understand that somehow~


And thanks for everything I can't thank you for ok? You're a great friend regardless of how I say it~

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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...

~Cyre
:icongee-black-parade:
Thanks for everything, my dear Bladegrasp !!! That's far too beautiful, thank you !!

You see, we'll find a way through this ! I know !

Have a very, very nice day !


Gee

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:iconladyknight17:
Very nice!

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Thanks!
:iconbladegrasp:
Thanks~! Lol you're awesome~

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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...

~Cyre
:iconladyknight17:
Aww...your welcome and thank you!

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Hey. Read my comic at [link]

Thanks!

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