I wish you were here, I wish you were stone, Your worth immeasurable by gold… And though there may be many diamonds shining bright from heartfelt rings, None would refract the light and hopes of my soul like you, Because the delightful mineral composition of your body cannot be matched, And no cut will fit you best than the one by the side of your dress, Revealing the crystal clear reflection of my desires by the heartbeat of your every step… |
Author's Comments
”Elemental Love” Collection:
I wish you were Wind: [link] I wish you were Water: [link] I wish you were Earth: [link] I wish you were Fire: [link] I wish you were Music: [link] All five pieces possess their own tone and message; therefore I would have failed them if I would have made them into a single poem. “Elemental Love” is a very dear Collection for me. Even though it’s Open Poetry, it carries a level of format I desired to sustain through the whole Collection: 8-Line Pieces 4th line begins with “And though”, completely twisting the thoughts of the preceding lines. The Elemental references are not repeated throughout the whole Collection. Please leave behind your comments and thoughts. I’ll hold you in my highest regard for your time and attention~ Very Respectfully, ~Bladegrasp |
|
Community News205 400 Warming Christmas And Winter Images*rebeka-anne
 reports, 1d 16h agoA Collection of seasonal art of all mediums and genres, and from artists of all ages and talents from well seasoned experts to beginners. 100 It is Christmas in the heart...*6igella
 reports, 1d 6h agoIt is Christmas in the heart that puts Christmas in the air. Big photography feature about Christmas, full of wonderful works and wise christmas quotations. Happy holidays to you! 76 Natures Beauty by small artists*holzoepfael
 reports, 1d 9h agoI'd like to show you some awesome nature related work from more or less unknown artists which deserve more attention - this is a must see, you won't regret it!!! 60 Daily Literature Deviations- December 25, 2009=DailyLitDeviations
 reports, 1d 14h agoDaily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it. Each day we will feature 5 deviations from the Literature categories in a News Article. In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you  the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community.59 Featuring Great Artist and my Watchers! Final 2009*Halisoar
 reports, 15h 21m agoWelcome to a New!! feature!  Thanks to all the people who post and share their work! Don´t forget to fav this new!!  This time i´m also featuring my amazing watchers!!! they all are great and really talented!!! so give them some love  Also see the other parts of the feature here!!  [link] So enjoy the Feature!!!!! 55 WE.LOVE.ART.FEATURE.VII.HOLIDAY.SPECIAL.~allieweasley
 reports, 1d 2h agoI'm a lover of visual impacts. I like brilliant colors and shapes. And I decided to collect a whole stack of deviations that reflect that taste. These pieces showcased below deserve every bit of publicity you can give them. x)P |
PollWhat is your favorite holiday tradition? |
deviantART Loves You
Deviously serving the art and skin community for 3,428 days.
Only 224 days until our tenth birthday!
|
Deviousness
^Ikue has been a devious member of our community for almost 7 years and in this time he has proven to be nothing short of dedicated and devoted. Whilst volunteering his time over the last 22 months as a Gallery Moderator within the Community Relations Team, Chris has brought the Vector gallery and many vector artists directly into the spotlight. ^Ikue's commitment to the community is evident in everything he touches and you can always find him reaching out to others with an encouraging word. Chris is a natural leader with a vibrant and empathic personality, and is a role model for deviants everywhere. It's ev... Read More
|
Report a Policy Violation
Follow us on Twitter
Become a fan on Facebook
Comments
And yes, there are so many poets writing so much sadness these days... What happened to heartfelt emotions?
If you like this kind of poems, take a look at my dream shoppe~ There's something for everyone in there!
--
See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...
~Cyre
Thats my favorite line. Its so very fluid and graceful, I love the poise that seems to personify itself by this piece.
Great work!
--
"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe
I can't think of words good enough to share my heart on this piece.
--
---
To achieve the marvelous, it is precisely the unthinkable that must be thought.
I was really proud of "Earth" although I don't know but it may be the weakest of the whole collection. I am sure "Fire" is a stronger poem at least.
That line though, all other elements envy it!
--
See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...
~Cyre
--
"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe
Thanks so much for your inputs and such faithful dedication to every piece i've been posting lately! You rock~
--
See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...
~Cyre
As much as I loved writing them, so full of 'hope' for someone to like them this much~
--
See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...
~Cyre
I most certainly hope whoever you wrote them for enjoyed them as much as you hoped they would.
--
"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe
Previous PageNext Page