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I wish you were Fire - 4 of 5 by ~Bladegrasp:iconBladegrasp:



I wish you were here,
I wish you were flame,
Blazing through all of my emotions…

And though I feel tempted to lay by your warming light,
I heed the burning desire to fuel such fascinating moment,
While the fire in your waist dances in my arms begging to engulf me whole,
Bringing forth the warmth of your breathtaking silhouette by the flames of our obsession,
Combustion of volatile sensations, flammable embraces, explosive afternoons…
©2008-2009 ~Bladegrasp
:iconbladegrasp:

Author's Comments

”Elemental Love” Collection:

I wish you were Wind: [link]
I wish you were Water: [link]
I wish you were Earth: [link]
I wish you were Fire: [link]
I wish you were Music: [link]


All five pieces possess their own tone and message; therefore I would have failed them if I would have made them into a single poem.

“Elemental Love” is a very dear Collection for me. Even though it’s Open Poetry, it carries a level of format I desired to sustain through the whole Collection:

8-Line Pieces
4th line begins with “And though”, completely twisting the thoughts of the preceding lines.
The Elemental references are not repeated throughout the whole Collection.


Please leave behind your comments and thoughts. I’ll hold you in my highest regard for your time and attention~



Very Respectfully,

~Bladegrasp

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:iconmythicaldamienne:
The passion within each line of this poem is of such depth! I can FEEL emotion as I read this, quite overwhelming really...and my heart sings out for this kind of love! Bravo!

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To achieve the marvelous, it is precisely the unthinkable that must be thought.
:iconcyre:
Fire...the bold emblem and symbol of passion.

I think you've expressed it well here, very well in fact. Such clear and heartfelt imagery...great job...again.

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"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe
:iconbladegrasp:
He's out there my dear~ Burning for you~

Dream on~

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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...

~Cyre
:iconninthefragile:
I like the passionate words you used to describe the actions and emotions going on in this and the others in the series nice work...

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
:iconbladegrasp:
You and myth need to go check someone elses' work! I'm going to end up having to write on YOU GUYS if you keep this going ><!

Thanks as always!

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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...

~Cyre
:iconcyre:
*raises eyebrows*

Well if you really feel that I should leave...

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"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe
:iconbladegrasp:
I'm truly happy that you liked them~

Lot of emotion went into every word for all five pieces~

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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...

~Cyre
:iconmythicaldamienne:
Trust me. All I do is dream.

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To achieve the marvelous, it is precisely the unthinkable that must be thought.
:iconbladegrasp:
I'll join you for some stars and seas then~

Stick around some more, I'm cooking a nice dinner for tomorrow~ Hopefully I get to finish working on it tonight so I can post it ><!

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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...

~Cyre

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