I wish you were here,
I wish you were music,
The blessing of calling you my own…
And though all the critics said it would never happen for me,
That altos and sopranos belong to theaters and dreams,
And the music of your ballad would remain an epic figment,
But to their surprise our concert was heavenly melody,
Featuring all celestial choirs; audience of bards, poets and cupids…
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”Elemental Love” Collection:
I wish you were Wind: [link] I wish you were Water: [link] I wish you were Earth: [link] I wish you were Fire: [link] I wish you were Music: [link] All five pieces possess their own tone and message; therefore I would have failed them if I would have made them into a single poem. “Elemental Love” is a very dear Collection for me. Even though it’s Open Poetry, it carries a level of format I desired to sustain through the whole Collection: 8-Line Pieces 4th line begins with “And though”, completely twisting the thoughts of the preceding lines. The Elemental references are not repeated throughout the whole Collection. Please leave behind your comments and thoughts. I’ll hold you in my highest regard for your time and attention~ Very Respectfully, ~Bladegrasp |
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To achieve the marvelous, it is precisely the unthinkable that must be thought.
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"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe
I depend on people like you guys to make me write new work~ Without you I wouldn't be able to see all this pieces to completion; unapreciated forms of love are the worst pain a writer can be poisoned with~
Thanks for continuously fascinating me~
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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...
~Cyre
Although you don't really have to comment on every poem I post my dear~ Neither do you have to lay down a paragraph for me~ I'm happy knowing that you liked this one best~ Maybe I'll tailor a following piece to this one then~
Gracias~
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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...
~Cyre
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"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe
My pen will~
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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...
~Cyre
And I really don't see what is so fascinating about me, lol. I'm just enamored of your work.
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To achieve the marvelous, it is precisely the unthinkable that must be thought.
Makes you wondrous to me~ Muses are always godsent~
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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...
~Cyre
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"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe
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