I wish you were here,
I wish you were river,
Insatiable currents of love on your bed…
And though I have never dived in other waters,
There is no other taste that can quench my thirst for passion,
For I long only the freshness of your stream,
And my heart shall remain damp past your flooding caress,
Dragging me to fall down your waterfalls in hopes of seas full of you…
©2008-2009 ~Bladegrasp
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”Elemental Love” Collection:
I wish you were Wind: [link]
I wish you were Water: [link]
I wish you were Earth: [link]
I wish you were Fire: [link]
I wish you were Music: [link]
All five pieces possess their own tone and message; therefore I would have failed them if I would have made them into a single poem.
“Elemental Love” is a very dear Collection for me. Even though it’s Open Poetry, it carries a level of format I desired to sustain through the whole Collection:
8-Line Pieces
4th line begins with “And though”, completely twisting the thoughts of the preceding lines.
The Elemental references are not repeated throughout the whole Collection.
Please leave behind your comments and thoughts. I’ll hold you in my highest regard for your time and attention~
Very Respectfully,
~Bladegrasp
I wish you were Wind: [link]
I wish you were Water: [link]
I wish you were Earth: [link]
I wish you were Fire: [link]
I wish you were Music: [link]
All five pieces possess their own tone and message; therefore I would have failed them if I would have made them into a single poem.
“Elemental Love” is a very dear Collection for me. Even though it’s Open Poetry, it carries a level of format I desired to sustain through the whole Collection:
8-Line Pieces
4th line begins with “And though”, completely twisting the thoughts of the preceding lines.
The Elemental references are not repeated throughout the whole Collection.
Please leave behind your comments and thoughts. I’ll hold you in my highest regard for your time and attention~
Very Respectfully,
~Bladegrasp
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Thanks so much for sharing~ I truly appreciate it!
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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...
~Cyre
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"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe
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To achieve the marvelous, it is precisely the unthinkable that must be thought.
"Water" was by far the most fluid of all. I took it out of my board for quite some time; it couldn't be "water" if it wasn't fluid. This was what it ended like.
By the way... Two very key points:
1. Did you noticed how the word "water" isn't present at all by itself? I mean, as the noun representing the liquid. "Waters" obviously eludes to bodies of water...
2. The word "bed" in the 3rd line... Read it again... Notice the double meaning? Bed for bed... or bed for riverbed...? Depends on how sensual your mind decides to be...
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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...
~Cyre
If you have a second, take a look at my reply to Cyre in this poem, couple of nice points I should of added to the Writer's Description~
Thanks!
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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...
~Cyre
And the second point I did notice...so we know where my mind is...It made me smile when I thought of it and then blush because thats how I roll.
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"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe
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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...
~Cyre
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