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Your love for me is poison,
Sweet venom through my veins,
Toxic fatality consuming my senses,
Lethal fascination contaminating my mind…

Your love for me is virus,
Mortally ripping through my days,
My heart is swelling for your voice,
How you cancerously obliterate my nights…

Your love for me is infection,
Choking my soul with every kiss,
Clogging every artery with blisters of you,
Incurable disease binds my hands to your waist…

Your love for me is asphyxiating,
Obstructing my lungs when I don’t have you,
Suffocation follows when you touch me,
Can’t breathe without your lips in mine…

Your love for me is death,
Inevitable syndrome of living for you,
Your hips leave me sore with desire,
Irrational heart attack when you claim me yours…

Your love for me is terminal,
The only disease I wish to die from,
Aggravated condition that kills me slowly,
Consented murder in your arms tonight…
©2008-2009 ~Bladegrasp
:iconbladegrasp:

Author's Comments

This is an attempt to conceptualize love into something other than beautiful things.

Love can be anything if well visualized. I don't think love is only in roses and chocolate, and if you do please let me show you a world full of love~ It's everywhere! From the smallest feeling to the mightiest thing, emotion or possibility.

Suffering is a waste of time. Completely inneficient and worthless. I'm trying to approach it with a concept based on true love and hopefully I succeed to impact a soul into seeing that. He/She is out there waiting for you, don't misuse your time letting yourself be hurt by senselessness.

Most importantly, this is for someone that showed me no mercy.
This is for someone that does not care about my attitudes or hindrances.
This is for someone that is going to make me love her regardless of my opinion about it, because she is the beautiful cancer of my life.
I can't cure her; she is my terminal adoration.


Pauline, I want to love you. Far beyond the span of your dreams, beyond all conceivable possibilities. I want to fall ill of you for the rest of my days; no serum, no treatment, nothing. I'll take you as you are.


I'm dying for you~
~Kendall

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:iconspottacus:
I'm just browsing around your gallery and I just love the way you write your poems, truely beautiful and very well put.
I love it so~

This poem really shows the other side of addicted love. C:
To say it's beautiful is an understatment, it's just...to much for typed words.

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Heaven help us and our manly urges.
:iconbladegrasp:
Hahah well now I'm thoroughly embarrased ><

Thank you so much for the support and for coming back around! :hug: This poem means a lot to me, and it was truly hard to put together since I'm not used to writing with words like these. However, I do think that I tried hard enough and it came out to make me quite happy~!

It's been a good day meeting a ton of fantastic people; I appreciate you for being one of them!

Thank again!
~Bladegrasp

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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...

~Cyre
:iconschierzo-galliard:
This is a very creative way of showing what love is.

It felt like there's an irony in it - like, you search for love but it destroys you in return. Or like , the idea in the sentence, "I love you so much that it hurts." So for me, it gives an air of sadness. But in the midst of it is someone deeply in love who's willing to hold on no matter what.

Very nice piece. ;)

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My dream is to see a woman cry....
...because I made her too happy.

:aww:
:iconbladegrasp:
I think you have an impressive grasp of what I wanted to say through this poem my friend!

But let me add a thought to yours here for a second~

"You search for love but it destroys you in return." - Quite true, but the difference between "love" and true love is that the latter, when you're blessed with finding it, destroys you completely and builds you anew, better than before in care of she who you now belong to.

That, my friend, is true love.

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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...

~Cyre
:icongee-black-parade:
Ooooohhh ^^ Bladegrasp listen to much Dead! and cancer at the same time :D !

By the way, how beautiful your poem is !! I'M FOND OF IT !!!!!!!!!!!!

*Calling Mr. Gerard Arthur Way for appointment* yes huhhh... I've got someone for your next CD ^^ !

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----- sOmE LIneS ShOUldN't bE CroSSeD -----
:iconbladegrasp:
:glomp: I really missed you :nod:


Thanks for your awesome words as always my dear; you make my life 1% better every day :hug:

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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...

~Cyre
:icongee-black-parade:
Only 1 % ?

Looll just wait for my coming and you'll see this will be much more than 1 % :D !!!

I missed you too :)


Gee

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----- sOmE LIneS ShOUldN't bE CroSSeD -----
:iconninthefragile:
Well written.. nice work

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
:iconuchiharuno1996:
very nice

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Kazashita te hiraite ano taiyou ni yararesousa
Yuutsu na omoi wa sora ni tokashite ikou
Atsui jaketto nugisute hashiri dashitanda dakara 6, 7, 8
Nai kaze fukasete ima tobi dashite GO!

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