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Inspired by the Open format and Art of Mythicaldamienne :iconmythicaldamienne: on the following:

"Spent Time": Poem - [link]

"Safe Haven": Visual Art - [link]

And Visual Art by Bizzozeron :iconbizzozeron:, specificly the following:

"Light in my Life": Visual Art - [link]

Thanks to both of you for your dedication to your craft, and most importantly the inspiration you provide us with your heartfelt pieces of art~


This is obviously Open, but lately I've been slightly addicted to new kinds of format, so I decided to bring a new plot twist to the novel. As the title suggests, every word is a verb inside context, and If you stress your imagination you may be able to follow and finish the sentences that should come out of each one.

I was working on a second version of this that had sentences to all of the words, and it all just happened to fall in order like it is on this piece, putting in Bold the verbs here displayed. However, I can't really work around not being able to use a solid, even letter like Courier New in deviantART, therefore it just won't fall in place like it should, meaning this will maybe be the last form we will see of this poem.

Thanks again for your support, comments, favorites, time and best wishes. If I may be of any assistance, don't hesitate~

God bless your days,
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slumbermonster Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2008
I just love the way you write!~ Very romantic. :glomp:
Bizzozeron Featured By Owner May 12, 2008
Great have a true skill in your art, keep up the good work n__n
mythicaldamienne Featured By Owner May 11, 2008
If a person can fall in love with a poem, the idea behind it, and the hope a poem can give...then I am in love.

This is excellent!

I think you should keep experimenting! You scored a 10 on this;)

Thank you for your kindness, too.....:heart:
Bladegrasp Featured By Owner May 11, 2008
Love shares only one characteristic with Logic...

In that it can be summoned only by a force equally proportional...

Thanks for your support and comments!
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