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Welcome my dear,
Please have a sit,
Candles are lit,
Emotional music,
Your smile so acoustic,
Your eyes dive in mine,
Your lips bless the wine,
With tender caress,
No words can express,
Your timeless perfection,
We dance for redemption,
You’re mine this one night,
Your whispers bring light,
To all of my fears,
Welcome my dear,
My dear loneliness…
©2008-2009 ~Bladegrasp
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Author's Comments

Not quite the best of me but I've been away from writing for enough time now. I decided to start with something simple and with just one twist; hopefully in the near future I'll be able to write something more complex and entertaining.

I still like it though, although if you've read through my other pieces you know I'm not a sad poetry writer at all. Thanks in advance for your comments; always appreciated.


Have a wonderful day,

~Bladegrasp

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:iconladyknight17:
Very nice.

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:iconbladegrasp:
Thanks as always~

Nice to see you're well and around~

Have a fantastic day,
~Bladegrasp

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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...

~Cyre
:iconladyknight17:
:hug:

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:iconschierzo-galliard:
i like the way this poem is written. and the twist in the end is perfect.

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My dream is to see a woman cry....
...because I made her too happy.

:aww:

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