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You're My Absolute Disaster by ~Bladegrasp:iconBladegrasp:



You’re my absolute disaster,
The most beautiful calamity,
For your voice is sensual tragedy,
Catastrophe of the heart,
Your hands break my soul apart,
Your eyes rupture my conviction,
Your lips tempt my wild addiction,
For the chaos of your kiss,
Pandemonium in your hips,
Devastating every second,
Your destructive figure beckons,
For the outburst of my arms,
As your caustic heartbeat warms,
And obliterates my days,
Every word eradicates,
We have forcefully agreed,
Because you’re the one I need,
You’re my absolute disaster…
©2008-2009 ~Bladegrasp
:iconbladegrasp:

Author's Comments

For the most destructive, extreme, unstoppable force I've ever allowed to impact my simple life...

Pauline; you're a fantastic explosion of love that has shattered me beyond repair. I'm broken for you. Thank you for undoing my symmetric sufferings and twisting my days as wildly as you do.

Your chaos is the most addictive fascination. Please continue ripping me apart and building me anew; I need your emotional revolution to keep marching all over my heart.

Just be aware that one day it will be my turn to return fire... and my retaliation for all the love you've detonated around me will be quite more than just some degree of vengeance. It will be the most beautiful retribution your eyes have ever mesmerized upon. I have your heart in my sights and I'm a darn good sniper. I'll kiss the cross in your lips on the picture I always carry and in such blessing I'll find enough courage to take you down and kill all your fears forever. Keep making me yours and that's the consequence that awaits; you'll be just as mine.

I don't miss. I won't. That's how much I love you.


~Kendall

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:iconninthefragile:
fantastically written... not something I usually saw... in fact had to use spell check on it... lol... in general well worded and great to the point stanzas that all flowed well

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
:iconbladegrasp:
Thanks a lot for checking it out~! This piece means a whole lot to me because it's a very important day for me and my girlfriend. She deserves so much more than words and poems, but I try hard.

I'm happy you liked it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

I appreciate your support as always, and I've been checking out your new work; quite a lot of it coming around and it's all very good~!

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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...

~Cyre
:icongee-black-parade:
Thanks, my love, for being such a beautiful disaster for me, the angel with blessed wings that heals my scars...

You're here by my side, I know... and so I wanted you to see that :

Happy Birthday, darling !

I'll always love you !

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----- sOmE LIneS ShOUldN't bE CroSSeD -----
:iconbladegrasp:
I'll always love you too :glomp: you're the best moment of my life~

Have a great day ok? Don't forget its Saturday :nod:

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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...

~Cyre
:icongee-black-parade:
Won't forget it ! Even if I forgot to watch your note on dA saying you were on MSN... *big sigh* sorry...

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----- sOmE LIneS ShOUldN't bE CroSSeD -----
:iconearth-bomb:
i absolutely adore this. beautifully written..

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H.B. Sphynx
:iconbladegrasp:
Hahah well thank you much for the kind words~ I truly appreciate you talking some time and reading my work, means the world to me.

Welcome to deviantART and please do come back~! I'm looking forward to seeing you around :nod:


Have a fantastic day; nice to meet you~
~Bladegrasp

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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...

~Cyre
:iconcyre:
Truly touching. Written with so much emotion that it literally bounces off the screen and entraps your heart. Its quite frankly put, mesmerizing.

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"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe
:iconbladegrasp:
As always, thank you for your wonderful words~

Where you've been? I've been looking for you! Was kind of close to sending you an email~ I hope everything's fine~!

You make my day again as always,
~Kendall

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See you've got to fall in love and marry a woman who combats your overwhelming love with her own by coming up with new ways to make -you- happy! Doesn't that make sense? Then when you go crazy, you go crazy together...crazy in love...

~Cyre

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